Hi Lily, I definitely think that you have a good eye for design. There were a couple things I really liked in your poster: - You used the title 'A Healthy Diet' to show your topic and you added a little description to discuss what it means - You included a food pyramid diagram and explained it to your audience. - You've added serving sizes to help your audience make good food choices
I noticed that you've used different coloured boxes to group your ideas. I think headings would also be useful so I know straight away what each box is about.
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Hi Lily, I definitely think that you have a good eye for design. There were a couple things I really liked in your poster:
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- You included a food pyramid diagram and explained it to your audience.
- You've added serving sizes to help your audience make good food choices
I noticed that you've used different coloured boxes to group your ideas. I think headings would also be useful so I know straight away what each box is about.