Hi Lily, you worked really hard at this! As I looked through the slides, you had done many of the activities. That was a lot of reading and thinking and writing. I especially liked the stained glass window and the explanation you wrote about the math for the window.
Kia Ora Lily, you've put in so much care and effort into your activities. You should be very proud of yourself! I've left some comments for you in your slides:)
Hi Lily, Thanks for sharing the screen cast of your MineCraft Fort. I really like the water feature - it looked like a water slide and that would be a fantastic addition to a fort. The swimming pool was great as well. Inside it looked cool and refreshing - perfect for a hot day.
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Hi Lily, you worked really hard at this! As I looked through the slides, you had done many of the activities. That was a lot of reading and thinking and writing. I especially liked the stained glass window and the explanation you wrote about the math for the window.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Lily, you've put in so much care and effort into your activities. You should be very proud of yourself! I've left some comments for you in your slides:)
ReplyDeleteHi Lily,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing the screen cast of your MineCraft Fort. I really like the water feature - it looked like a water slide and that would be a fantastic addition to a fort. The swimming pool was great as well. Inside it looked cool and refreshing - perfect for a hot day.