Hi Lily, Wow, what a lot of work you have put into this again. It seems you have a good routine and work hard each day. I can tell from the fast finishers you did every day of the week.
That piece of persuasive writing was short and sweet. You clearly summed up your view and gave good reasons. Next, how about some rhetorical questions and expert opinions???
That Minecraft flower would make a great mural. I think people who play Minecraft would recognise it and really enjoy it. And people who don't play Minecraft will think, "there's a flower made of pixels." Very fun.
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Hi Lily,
ReplyDeleteWow, what a lot of work you have put into this again. It seems you have a good routine and work hard each day. I can tell from the fast finishers you did every day of the week.
That piece of persuasive writing was short and sweet. You clearly summed up your view and gave good reasons. Next, how about some rhetorical questions and expert opinions???
That Minecraft flower would make a great mural. I think people who play Minecraft would recognise it and really enjoy it. And people who don't play Minecraft will think, "there's a flower made of pixels." Very fun.
Keep up the great work.