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Friday, 10 December 2021

My poem clinic for week 8

For this week we did one of the hardest poems to write, I really enjoyed it and will definitely keep those good ways of writing poems not forgotten!

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  1. Miss Kwok14 December 2021 at 14:34

    Hi Lily, I read your poem and was so moved. You've really captured the confusion and sadness of someone who is trying to understand loss. My favourite line is "The chorus fades down, into a mellow whisper". I can feel the person's loneliness in that moment.

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