Hi this week we have been learning about identity and what it means.
Nothing out of the ordinary poem
Purpose: to entertain
Audience: For people who want know about me
Me just me nothing out of the ordinary My size is 9 and my hips are fine but i’m nothing out of the ordinary.
My name is Lily yes the flower Lily but sometimes I wish it was another, Sometimes I wish my name was Stella because it only takes a moment to say and sometimes just sometimes I wish it was Ella because I think it’s an tongue twist to explain but when I can’t make up my mind I wish it was bell because it’s a lovely name.
Me just me nothing out of the ordinary, My size is fair and my hips are square but i’m nothing out of the ordinary.
By Lily R
Hi Lily, this is a lovely poem. I'm getting goosebumps as I am reading it because your honesty and authenticity shows through. I especially love that you used repetition of the line 'me just me nothing out of the ordinary'. This sentence brings balance to your poem and emphasizes the way you view yourself. Very clever use of rhymes like 'another'/'stella'. Ka pai!
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