Lily, I can see the effort you've put into your work. Well done for trialling all the different combinations of ducks and pigs. Your poem shows increasing sophistication with words, I love this line ' the grape vine is flowing like a rhythm to a song.'
Have a look again at the Grandpa's pockets problem. Instead of adding 4 each time, it should be doubled.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Lily, I can see the effort you've put into your work. Well done for trialling all the different combinations of ducks and pigs. Your poem shows increasing sophistication with words, I love this line ' the grape vine is flowing like a rhythm to a song.'
ReplyDeleteHave a look again at the Grandpa's pockets problem. Instead of adding 4 each time, it should be doubled.
cool
ReplyDelete