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Friday, 16 October 2020

my poem


The wind how it blows

The wind how it blows

                               Everyone knows

                          The wind how it blows

                   they wrap up in warm clothes

                        The wind how it blows

   Have your hot cocoa and warm up your cold toes

                        The wind how it blows

             Have chocolate and marshmallows

                        The wind how it blows 

                                 Everyone knows

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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous24 November 2020 at 13:37

    I really like your poem Lily. Maybe you could use/fix sone lines. Maybe you could write different lines instead of repeating them.

    - Diyabetes

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  2. Anonymous25 November 2020 at 13:37

    Hi Lily! really love the writing i also really like the rhymes keep it up!

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  3. Anonymous9 December 2020 at 14:12

    NOPE OH HELL NAH I'M NOT DOING THAT

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